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There’s a place that I knew, long, long ago,
Where scarlet red roses were meant to grow.
The petals dancing, the buds held so high,
With a sense of passion that covered the sky.
This place is a garden, lively and dear,
And thorns that trickle and tickle out fear.
The sun shines, the day is lit, no heart is held fast,
The scarlet red roses are not meant to last.
The winter comes with a breath of cold chill,
With roses wilting so fragile and still.
A new world is made, a land full of frost,
The blooming red blossoms have now all been lost.
Yet, however, I hold open a flower, strong and upbeat,
Who has lived through this storm, who has conquered this feat.
With warm hands, the rose is held high,
With watery tears that make the rose cry.
The flower is here, the flower will pardon,
The dream I once had, of the scarlet rose garden.
This is my entry for the second round of :iconwriters--club:'s writing tournament! :D

As with all my work, this poem means a lot to me, so please tell me your thoughts, and best of luck to all the other participants! :D
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RollingTomorrow Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013   General Artist
Thank you for entering the :iconwriters--club: Tournament! :la:

There are very beautiful descriptions in this piece! It also flowed very smoothly with all the rhymes.

Keep up the great work!


*TheFinalHikari
Founder of #Writers--club, #LandoftheSky, and #Live-Love-Write
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N1njaStar28 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much for the comment! I'm so honored you found time to read my poem! :D
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yumyum36 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Reminds me a bit of Robert Frost.
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N1njaStar28 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I love Robert Frost! He's my favorite poet! Thank you! :D
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GlitterGeekAngel Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
for some reason, this reminds me of the first scene in the Scarlet Letter when Hester leaves the jailhouse. i guess it mostly reminds me of the pretty rosebush that's in front of the prison door
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N1njaStar28 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
That was actually one of my inspirations. =)
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GrindletheWise Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013
Dude, this is awesome! Superb work!
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N1njaStar28 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! I sure hope it's good enough, lol! :iconsweatplz:
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GrindletheWise Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013
I'm sure it is.
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N1njaStar28 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well thank you! =)
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